What do you notice that Jonathan London added to his writing in the book Puddles? Why did he do that?
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Hailey&Caitlyn
10/3/2014 12:33:58 am
Jonathan London uses action word's and changes the font and rhyming and it's like a song and he uses vocabulary and he uses sond Word's and he changes his characters mind's and he uses dialog and he uses seting .
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addison donnelly
11/23/2014 07:24:39 am
HAILEY&CAITLYN my group notice rhyming to!!
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Leah and Ally and Avery
10/3/2014 12:36:16 am
I like your book because you rime. I like you that use action words. I like the Book jonathon London because he told us where he
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Jeani & Addison & Katelyn.
10/3/2014 12:36:43 am
Rhyming words like hop,flop-plop. and there is a dialogue in the middle.and dialogue means to talk to someone & I looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooove his
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Landon &Faith &Sean
10/3/2014 12:38:09 am
I like the rhythm because it sound's like a song .I like the sound words because they are cool . I like the rhyme's.
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Heidi & Sharmeen & Kaidyn
10/3/2014 12:38:24 am
I like Jonathan London because he uses good action words. You make great rhyming words to. I like when he put the scared sound.
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Isabella h
10/3/2014 12:46:46 am
I like it
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Keturah &. Justin. And.donyae and
10/3/2014 12:39:30 am
Repeating the words over again & I like the riming words like frog & log. I like wane he
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Isabella & kian & Tyler .
10/3/2014 12:39:46 am
Puddles is a good book you should read it & it has a good rhyming & good words and it is made by Jonathan London. We LOOOOOOOOOOVE this book & i like the part where it's like slup slup slup & it is really fun to read and if it raind you should read it the end.
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Isabella h
10/3/2014 12:45:19 am
Nice
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Azure & Juliet & Keemari
10/3/2014 12:40:06 am
Rhythm, sound effects,
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Natalie,Jason, Elizabeth
10/3/2014 12:41:33 am
He Had sound words. Drip drip he uses vocabulary words.and he told where he was. He had action and a tune. He was scared but he wasn't that showed how they felt.
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